ieltscommunity7

Monday, January 23, 2006

New weblog

Hello ladies!

Nice to hear from you (well a couple of you, at least have been in touch).

There is a new course and new website:
www.ieltsguide.blogspot.com
that has kicked off.

Drop in and leave a comment or whatever.

Good luck

Tony

Friday, December 30, 2005

The train now leaving Kings Cross Station Platform 6.5...

So, ladies, have you got what it takes?

This is the ninth IELTS class that I have taught at the BC in 2005. It has not been the worst and certainly has NOT been the best - kind of 'middle of the road' / 'average', I suppose is a fair assessment.

Regarding weblog participation the 'cream' has gone very sour. When my next course kicks off on 14 Jan 2006 my memories will start fading very quickly. By then you'll be panicking over your upcoming IELTS and the day before the exam is NOT the time to revise the priceless notes that I have given you.

Tuesday's 'absent eight' let themselves down and I was not happy, but it was your immature, irresponsible, irrational decision, despite the undertaking that you ALL agreed to at the beginning of the course...

Moving on, I have marked your writing tests from Tuesday and am pleased to see improvement and adherence, for the most part, to what I have been preaching IELTS-wise, well done the 'present eight'!

TOMORROW, Saturday, we enter the final week with:

  1. the third debate - keep your minds open - the conspiracy theorists must prove murder with facts and not Internet gossip
  2. feedback on your writing + 2 excellent handouts and some model answers
  3. grammar workshop on using/not using 'a' or 'the' - you make far, far too many mistakes here
  4. a final old weblog student IELTS exam feedback report - the inimitable Mohammed Saeed Mahfouz - the well known TV journalist
  5. a sheet on how to organise your VOCABULARY learning
  6. a final handout on speaking, maybe some practice too
  7. interviews for Cica and Laila
  8. a full scale WRITING test - task 1 and task 2
  9. bring your INSIGHT into IELTS coursebooks every day this week
  10. miss this lesson at your peril!

  • NO CLASS on Sunday, 1 January 2006
  • Listening, Reading and Writing tests on Monday 2 January 2006
  • Final class + certificates / feedback / future planning / Listening test # 6 on Tuesday 3 January 2006
Over and out, ladies!

Rashid and Vivek, thank you gentlemen for your interest.

Bye for now

Your disappointed, but not surprised

IELTS Tutor Tony

Sunday, December 25, 2005

Amna's Task 1 report + Tony's feedback

"Cambridge Test Book 1 page 72"

The (below) two charts describe how much people in Braitain (S) spent (their money) on fast food on a weekly basis (, while the bottom graph illustrates) and the consumption of fast food (between) in the period 1970 to 1990.

With regard to (In) (WC) 1970, of the various types of fast food, humburgers ((S) were considered to be the most purchased item among the high income(s' ) group (people) WC, each person spent for about (more than) fourty(S) pence per week. But this amount has fallen (G) to less than fifteen pence per person in the low income('s) catergory(S) who preferred fish and chips rather than humburgers. For all of the three diferent (S) categories - high income, average and low, pizza was almost the lowest in terms of purchasing.

[Keep it ALL in the PAST tense Amna! Super variety of language despite spelling mistakes!]

(On the other hand)(WC - much much overused linking word - all the class) As for 1970, there were 300 grammes consumed of fish and chips, however, this figure has decreased (GGGG why ?????) steadly (S) till 1985. Whereas for humburgers we found a sharp increased (G) between 1970 to (WRONG preposition - correct word = _ _ _ ??) 1990 where it reached the (WC) its peak.

The major conclusion that I have drawn is that humburgers (S!!!) was (SVA) the (most) most rapidly growing type of fast food consumed over the twenty year timespan in Britain..

Amna Al Zaabi

Again, despite the unfortunate spelling mistakes, Amna has tried hard to write an interesting, thoughtful report and has highlighted the main trends. What do YOU think, silent readers?

Terrific work, Miss Al Zaabi!!

Friday, December 23, 2005

Writing task 2

Topic:- (Cambridge Test Book 1, page 32)

"There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more importanat than the international music that is heard everywhere nowdays?"

Most of people believe that (the) music is the soul of the body. In this essay,(P) I (will)(G) shall(present)(WC)discuss ('present' , here, conveys a meaning as if you will play different types of music) the different kinds of music and the reasons why (do) people listen to music.(Another sentence indicating your own position regarding the type of music you think is more important, would have made this intro a classic three-sentence intro. Still, it is agood brief intro) [Ditto from me, Amna, it needed a further topic sentence to expand the importance of music from YOUR viewpoint]

It is undeniable that music is a beautiful art. These days we can listen to (many) different types of music, for example: western, traditional, classical, jazz and so on. (WC I do not like "etc".) Some people think that a particular type of music can reflect the person's personality or his (mode)(S) mood. In other words, (sensetive)(S)sensitive type of people mostly like classical(S) while (anger)(G) angry and (nervse)(S) nervous people like some type of jazz. In my point of view, people need music because it makes them comfortable and relaxed. Not only that, (P) but also it could help them in reducing their problems and (tentions)(S) tensions. In addition, most [of ] people (like)(WC) take music as a type of enjoyment in their life and it reflects(G) their happiness, (like)(WC) take for example what is happening in the weddings
.(In this paragaraph, Amna has discussed the reasons why people need music including her viewpoint) [Definitely she has discussed the question in a mature, balanced manner - maybe she could have talked a bit more about her personal tastes in music...]

(On the other hand)As far as the importance of type of music for a country is concerned, I strongly believe that traditional music is the most important type of music that our country should take care of. I am convinced that it reflect (SVA) our country's past and (in) (G) at the same time it is the (base)(S) basis of the furture trend. Moreover, in my view, there are certain types of musical equipments (G) that are used for our traditional music which make it different from other country's type. Traditional music will also cover our traditional (R) dance. It is commonly said that International music is our target and we should change our type(repetition) which I really disagree with.[Hmmmm, not really sure about that final point, try to make the last sentence in the paragraph clear and STRONG!]

In conclusion, music can play a very important part in our life and personality. It could be different from one person to another or even from one country to another, but at the end music is the (bone)(WC) foundation of each beautiful art.

Amna Al Zaabi


Well done again, Amna!
You are improving fast.Keep posting;the more you do, the better you become.

---------------------------25 December up-date from Tony -----------------------------

I echo Dr Rashid's wise words. I was expecting Amna to relate the topic to her personal tastes in music and the cultural heritage of the UAE. Do not be shy to talk about your home country in relation to the wider world. At the same time time, try not to be too narrow in your focus as well - we like to see "internationalism", don't we?

Super work Amna.

Terrific support, Dr Rashid, thank you, sir!

Come on the rest of you, time is running away from you.

Tony

25 December 2005
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Strengths of your writing:

1-You have used 4-paragraph and 3:5:5:3-senetence format.

2-Adequate length of essay - more than 250 words.

3-You have used connecting words and techniques of COHESION and COHERENCE.

4-You have written a brief intro and conclusion.

You need to work on your:

1-Spelling, punctuation and grammar - go to Hong Kong IELTS website.(website is given in Mr.Tony's handout.)
2-Your vocabulary - read as much as you can.
3-Your ideas and general knowledge - read newspapers, check the BBC website

General Task 2 Tips:

1-Allocate the first 5 minutes for brainstorming, outlining a format, writing down for- and against-vocabulary (especially synonyms of the key words in the title) and arranging ideas.
2-Start writing according to the format, either in a dissertation or argument style, coherently and cohesively, avoiding repetition.
3-Save some time for reviewing your writing.
4-Time your performance during practice - try to finish it in 40 minutes or less.

Rashid Saleem

Writing Task 1

The (below) chart illustrates (the different type of) various reasons why adults decide to study, (in addition) and who should cover or share the cost of adult education. [Super intro, short and sweet]

(Actually,)Forty percent of them [who?] are of the opinion that most (of) adults study because they are interested in the subject itself (which is the opinion of 40% of them). Whereas very few of them are interested to meet new people. If (you) we compare two of the reasons shown in the chart which are helpful for the current job and (to)for the improvement of prospects of promotion, we find a slight (decrease)(S) between these two reasons. 38% of people indicate that (to gain) acquiring qualification is considered(G)(S) to be the main factor or resason(S) for them.

On the other hand (WC this expression is much overused) why not "In addition"??, the study aslo (S) shows(ed)(you have used present tense in the previous paragraph, therefore the same tense should be used here) how do people think the cost of adult education should be covered. Most of them think that individual should take 40% of this responsiblity, (and)(P) 35 % should be shared and covered (from)(prep) by the employer (as 35%) and (from) the taxpayer (as) should contribute 25%.

In conclusion, (the results mean)(WC) it can be stated that everybody should share (in some certain of view the)(WO) some responisblity (S) (of)for(Prep) adult education
.(In conclusion you have just summarised the second paragraph without mentioning anything about the first paragraph)


Amna Al Zaabi
Your first venture is commendable for your initiative.

Task 1 is a description of statistical facts in words.It is not a writer's personal opinion.

The intro should describe 'what', 'when' and 'where'.

Each paragraph of the body should begin with a sentence expressing a general trend, followed by the elaboration of facts and statistics in words.The terms depicting trends and comparison are required for a good task.

The conclusion should summarise the intro and the body of the task.

For the grammatical evaluation of the task, over to Mr.Tony.

Rashid Saleem


Dear Sir,

The chart didn't show the period or the location. Therefore, I could not add them. However, I will try my best in next time. Thanks for your valuable comments. (Amna).

Dear Amna,

Your effort is appreciable.Keep it up!Keep posting.

Your final performance in the exam. will reflect your practice and hardwork you are doing now.

My comment, about TASK 1, was in general terms.

Luck favours the brave, and you are a brave person.

Rashid Saleem

Indeed a noble effort, Miss Al-Zaabi! I agree with Dr Rashid's comments and applaud your initiative in posting this task 1 (page 31 Cambridge test Book 1)

Super work, Amna and a wonderful example to the rest of the class!

Tony, at work on Christmas Day...



Just for the record

Ladies

I said I'd post a message every day, but in view of your spectacular lack of response, I won't bother any further.

Dr Rashid and Vivek, thanks for your interest, Ieltscream weblog do not appreciate how much they are losing.

That's it from me until Monday, unless this class shows some initiative.

Remember there is no class, Saturday 24 December and Sunday 25 December.

Tony

Thursday, December 22, 2005

Er, hello?

Hmmmm

The total lack of response to my previous message and general apathy to using this weblog in an active sense confirm my apprehensions about this class.

There seems to be no leaders, no dynamism, no hunger.

So, we'll go through the motions and when you look back and think "Why didn't I do this/that; ask Tony this/that?", it'll be too late.

It's your loss, ladies!

Anything for me to respond to would be most welcome.

Regards

Tony

I hope you're enjoying the weekend, I certainly am!

Wednesday, December 21, 2005

Your daily IELTS blogmessage

Good day, ladies!

You shall be pleased to know that you are free from me nagging you until MONDAY 26 December - remember the BC is closed on SAT/SUN 24/25 Dec.

Nevertheless, I shall send you a message on a daily basis, and gosh, who knows we might even have some interaction on the weblog?

So, by all means, chill over the next five days. Sort out the notes I have given you, look at your writing work - if that isn't enough feedback, then I'm a Chinaman!!!

There is also stuff in the coursebook that you can be going through:
  • task 1/2 writing
  • listening notes/tips
  • reading unit 3 & the Titanic project
  • the LEARNING ZONE will be open on Thursday 8am to 8pm (no pain = no gain)
Looking forward to hearing from you!

Tony as blogmember

Tuesday, December 20, 2005

Hello

Mmmmmmmmmm....Ok. I believe there is something strange (nothing new)!

OK, I would like to share my comments about yesterday's session.

First of all, I liked the debate it was really fun. The most useful thing for me was the writing practise task.

On the other hand, I strongly believe that the reading task was tooooooooooooo difficult. If you want the truth I admit that reading is my main problem. However, I will try my best to work hard in this regards.

:)

Mmmmmmmmmm.. what else. Ok I will try to post a new writing task by tonight.

Thanks

Amna Al Zaabi

Monday, December 19, 2005

Regards

Dear Abu Sheherazade,

Kindly send my regards to Zeena. I'm sure that she did well in her school concert last night.

Thanks & best regards,

Amna Al Zaabi

National Geographic - Reading Summary

I have been(G 'was') attracted with(prep 'by') a photo in the National Geographic Magazine for (prep 'of') a huge white shark attacking a person dangling from a helicopter. It was really a wonderful picture where at the first moment you will ask yourself (how did the photographer snaped (G 'snap') this photo?)

Not only that, but also this photograph was nominated by the National Geograhic as "the photo of the year". Here is the surprising thing, this scense (S scene) (has) (G) never happened! This picture was a composite of two other pictures.

This photos have been taken (G) in two different places for (prep) two different photographers. The most important thing is that this hoax has been captured (WC - discovered?) within one hour by Mr. David Braun and Stentor Danielson.

Thanks,

Amna Al Zaabi

Thank you for taking the trouble to post this report, Amna!

Monday, Monday...

Good morning ladies!

I hope you are all well this fine Monday morning.

With this course, ieltscommunity7, it seems that you are weblog readers rather than weblog writers. I can understand that, even though I strongly feel you would benefit from weblog posting messages, asking questions, putting corrected reports/letters/essays using BLOGMEMBER account in case your invitation got lost in cyberspace.

It's dead easy. Go to www.blogger.com sign in the Blogmember username and password. On the dashboard go to our blog name ieltscommunity / blog ID 19683548 click on NEW POST and then off you go - compose yourself!

Ah well, this is an informal blog, other ones were quite lively, let's use this a kind of class journal and message board - not just IELTS IELTS IELTS...

Tonight we have the first debate :Aysha/Bushra/Raja are the traditionalists who think computers DO NOT necessarily help children learn, while the innovators Alyazi/Mona/Layali will argue that computers are vital for CHILDREN (not us as adults). The rest of you will have read the article and will listen to the two two teams and decide who has given the better argument and say why. Each speaker has two minutes. I will summarise the main points and then the audience will decide. Next debate we shall have 6 different speakers and in the final debate I will help the side that has only two speakers.

Are there any more National Geographic reviews? Do swap the magazines around.

We'll also look at speaking and reading skills tonight. Did you read the speaking handout I gave you last night? Was it useful? I have some more tips tonight and what to say instead of "of course"! I'd like you to do a full scale reading test AND a task 2 writing as well - you have been warned! I'll also give you my three page list of special words for task 2 writing and my advice for the essay structure - all part of the service!

Zeena played like an angel in her school concert last night - I'll catch the video recording her mum made... Ah well, that's life, isn't it?

Rock on, ladies!

See you tonight, 6.30 sharp!

I also want to do a feedback session with you as we are halfway through the schedule after today's lesson - already!!! I need your suggestions as to what to concentrate on for the next 6 mega-lessons.

Hoping for some comments / reaction - even just to say "hello"!

Tony aka Firasse, Abu Firasse or Abu Sheherazade

Tuesday, December 13, 2005

IELTS scoring from www.ielts.org website

Ladies, please read and digest this information.

I'll give you a printout on Saturday, but this might come in useful.

Bye for now

Tony

ps Zeena says "hello"

IELTS Score processing, reporting and interpretation

All IELTS marking takes place at the test centre by trained markers and examiners. Markers are trained to understand the IELTS marking policy and are required to demonstrate that they are marking to standard before they are allowed to mark Listening and Reading papers. Markers are re-tested every two years to ensure that their marking remains up to standard. Systematic monitoring and double marking of a proportion of answer sheets is carried out at each administration.

Examiners for the Writing and Speaking modules are recruited and trained in line with agreed standards. They are required to demonstrate that they are marking to standard every two years in addition to on-going monitoring of their performance.

Candidates receive scores on a Band Scale from 1 to 9. A score is reported for each skill module of the test. The four individual module scores are averaged and rounded to produce an Overall Band Score. Overall Band Scores and Listening and Reading scores are presented as whole or half bands; Writing and Speaking band scores are reported in whole bands only.

Overall Band Score

Candidates receive a Test Report Form setting out their Overall Band Score and their scores on each of the four modules, Listening, Reading, Writing and Speaking. Each of the module scores is equally weighted. The Overall Band Score is calculated by taking the mean of the total of the four individual module scores. Overall Band Scores are reported to the nearest whole or half band. For the avoidance of doubt, the following rounding convention applies; if the average across the four skills ends in .25, it is rounded up to the next half band, and if it ends in .75, it is rounded up to the next whole band. Thus a candidate achieving 6.5 for Listening, 6.5 for Reading, 5.0 for Writing and 7.0 for Speaking would be awarded an Overall Band Score of 6.5 (25 ÷ 4 = 6.25 = Band 6.5). Likewise a candidate achieving 4.0 for Listening, 3.5 for Reading, 4.0 for Writing and 4.0 for Speaking would be awarded an Overall Band Score of 4.0 (15.5 ÷ 4 = 3.875 = Band 4.0). On the other hand, a candidate achieving 6.5 for Listening, 6.0 for Reading, 6.0 for Writing and 6.0 for Speaking would be awarded band 6 (24.5 ÷ 4 = 6.125 = Band 6).

Listening and Reading

IELTS Listening and Reading papers contain 40 items and each correct item is awarded one mark; the maximum raw score a candidate can achieve on a paper is 40. Band scores ranging from Band 1 to Band 9 are awarded to candidates on the basis of their raw scores.

Although all IELTS test materials are pretested and trialled before being released as live tests, there are inevitably minor differences in the difficulty level across tests. In order to equate different test versions, the band score boundaries are set so that all candidates ’ results relate to the same scale of achievement. This means, for example, that the Band 6 boundary may be set at a slightly different raw score across versions.

The tables below indicate the mean raw scores achieved by candidates at various levels in each of the Listening, Academic Reading and General Training Reading modules during 2004 and they provide an indication of the number of marks required to achieve a particular band score.

Listening

Band Score Raw score out of 40

5 16

6 23

7 30

8 35

Academic Reading General Training Reading

Band Score Raw score out of 40 Band Score Raw score out of 40

5 15 5 23

6 23 6 30

7 30 7 34

8 35

The Academic and General Training papers are graded to the same scale. The distinction between the two modules is one of genre or discourse type. Academic papers may contain source texts featuring more difficult vocabulary or greater complexity of style. It is usual that, to secure a given band score, a greater number of questions must be answered correctly on a General Training Reading paper.

Writing and Speaking

When marking the Writing and Speaking modules examiners use detailed performance descriptors which describe written and spoken performance at each of the 9 IELTS bands.

Writing

Examiners award a band score for each of four criterion areas: Task Achievement (for Task 1), Task Response (for Task 2), Coherence and Cohesion, Lexical Resource and Grammatical Range and Accuracy. The four criteria are equally weighted.

Speaking Examiners award a band score for each of four criterion areas: Fluency and Coherence, Lexical Resource, Grammatical Range and Accuracy and Pronunciation. The four criteria are equally weighted.

Versions of the band descriptors for Writing and Speaking have been developed to help stakeholders better understand the level of performance required to attain a particular band score in each of the criterion areas. IELTS examiners undergo intensive face to face training and standardisation to ensure that they can apply the descriptors in a valid and reliable manner.

Monday, December 12, 2005

Blogmember rules!

Hello everyone!

Gosh, isn't this fab! Anyone from I-cream blog can post a message by going to:

www.blogger.com

and signing in as blogmember - you know the USERNAME and PASSWORD, so if Tony's invitation got lost or not found or whatever, use blogmember!

This goes for past students, prize seekers, troopers, magicians etc, etc, etc

We have ONE student who has opened her email inbox and followed the link to open an account and make a username/password - come on the rest of you!!!

See you this evening

Tony B (masquerading as Blogmember)

Sunday, December 11, 2005

Good morning IELTS hopefuls!

Hello ladies!

I hope you aren't too 'shell shocked' from last night's session. Boy! Three hour lessons take some getting used to.

I hope to send out the blog invitations this afternoon.

Happy Sunday!

Tony

See, I was thinking of you!!!!

Thursday, December 08, 2005

Welcome to your blog!

Hello everybody!

This is the seventh blog that I have created for my British Council IELTS students.

I see it as your forum to ask questions, post messages and for past IELTS courses to help you in your quest.

Why did I choose 'cream' as the designation for this blog? Any ideas?

Check your email inboxes for invitations to join the weblog and sign up!

By the way, the previous 6 weblogs are a great source of advice and help for you in achieving your IELTS targets!

Best regards

Tony