Amna's Task 1 report + Tony's feedback

"Cambridge Test Book 1 page 72"

The (below) two charts describe how much people in Braitain (S) spent (their money) on fast food on a weekly basis (, while the bottom graph illustrates) and the consumption of fast food (between) in the period 1970 to 1990.

With regard to (In) (WC) 1970, of the various types of fast food, humburgers ((S) were considered to be the most purchased item among the high income(s' ) group (people) WC, each person spent for about (more than) fourty(S) pence per week. But this amount has fallen (G) to less than fifteen pence per person in the low income('s) catergory(S) who preferred fish and chips rather than humburgers. For all of the three diferent (S) categories - high income, average and low, pizza was almost the lowest in terms of purchasing.

[Keep it ALL in the PAST tense Amna! Super variety of language despite spelling mistakes!]

(On the other hand)(WC - much much overused linking word - all the class) As for 1970, there were 300 grammes consumed of fish and chips, however, this figure has decreased (GGGG why ?????) steadly (S) till 1985. Whereas for humburgers we found a sharp increased (G) between 1970 to (WRONG preposition - correct word = _ _ _ ??) 1990 where it reached the (WC) its peak.

The major conclusion that I have drawn is that humburgers (S!!!) was (SVA) the (most) most rapidly growing type of fast food consumed over the twenty year timespan in Britain..

Amna Al Zaabi

Again, despite the unfortunate spelling mistakes, Amna has tried hard to write an interesting, thoughtful report and has highlighted the main trends. What do YOU think, silent readers?

Terrific work, Miss Al Zaabi!!